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May 18, 2012
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Go right ahead, sir.
Keep stabbing at me.
Insult me with your words,
Your harsh, spiteful words,
Because I don't care anymore;
I'm too numb from all the agony
To even feel pain anymore.

Your ruthless insults,
Each like an individual knife,
Each opening up another wound,
Each slitting open another vien,
Each causing another river of blood,
Each slowly crumbling me to pieces,
Because it's not as if, initially,
I was normally the most confident person.

Why do I believe your name-calling?
Why is part of my mind soaking this all in,
And convincing myself that these are facts?
Tell me, sir, am I really stupid?
Do I seriously look like a clown?
If I went and left this world forever,
Because of your heartlessness,
Would you truthfully be the one laughing?

Excuse me, sir,
But could you please clarify,
Enlighten me with your reasoning,
For gradually ripping me to shreds,
When you can spot the hurt in my eyes,
When you can recognize how I lower my head
To hide these tears,
Every one shed represents my sinking confidence.

I gaze up at you,
My gloomy blue eyes glistening with tears,
Blood dripping from fresh wounds,
And I guess you really can't tell
How your words abuse me so.
Some kid at school is being really annoying....just a little something I whipped up.
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Cake4Never Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Excellent. Dicjs will be dicks, you know. All bullies are just spineless losers who will suck at everything because the suck suckfully... Sorry, that was kind of a vent right there. :P
ripstickgirl22 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Student General Artist
haha its okay
KKBossa Featured By Owner May 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're such a powerful writer. Next time that guy bothers you, tell him how much of a loser he is. You're nice and don't let them bring you down. ;)
ripstickgirl22 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Student General Artist
haha thanks i will
StarlightOrchard Featured By Owner May 21, 2012
That kid's mosy likely jealous of you becuase of a characteristic you have and they don't.
ripstickgirl22 Featured By Owner May 21, 2012  Student General Artist
i suppose
StarlightOrchard Featured By Owner May 21, 2012
*nod nod*
Aethrios Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Being able to echo both the situation and the feeling, I applaud your work. Nicely done.
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Ms-CoffeePixie Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
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