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Go right ahead, sir.
Keep stabbing at me.
Insult me with your words,
Your harsh, spiteful words,
Because I don't care anymore;
I'm too numb from all the agony
To even feel pain anymore.

Your ruthless insults,
Each like an individual knife,
Each opening up another wound,
Each slitting open another vien,
Each causing another river of blood,
Each slowly crumbling me to pieces,
Because it's not as if, initially,
I was normally the most confident person.

Why do I believe your name-calling?
Why is part of my mind soaking this all in,
And convincing myself that these are facts?
Tell me, sir, am I really stupid?
Do I seriously look like a clown?
If I went and left this world forever,
Because of your heartlessness,
Would you truthfully be the one laughing?

Excuse me, sir,
But could you please clarify,
Enlighten me with your reasoning,
For gradually ripping me to shreds,
When you can spot the hurt in my eyes,
When you can recognize how I lower my head
To hide these tears,
Every one shed represents my sinking confidence.

I gaze up at you,
My gloomy blue eyes glistening with tears,
Blood dripping from fresh wounds,
And I guess you really can't tell
How your words abuse me so.
Some kid at school is being really annoying....just a little something I whipped up.
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Cake4Never Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Excellent. Dicjs will be dicks, you know. All bullies are just spineless losers who will suck at everything because the suck suckfully... Sorry, that was kind of a vent right there. :P
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ripstickgirl22 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2012  Student Artist
haha its okay
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KKBossa Featured By Owner May 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're such a powerful writer. Next time that guy bothers you, tell him how much of a loser he is. You're nice and don't let them bring you down. ;)
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ripstickgirl22 Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Student Artist
haha thanks i will
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StarlightOrchard Featured By Owner May 21, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
That kid's mosy likely jealous of you becuase of a characteristic you have and they don't.
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:iconripstickgirl22:
ripstickgirl22 Featured By Owner May 21, 2012  Student Artist
i suppose
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StarlightOrchard Featured By Owner May 21, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
*nod nod*
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Aethrios Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Being able to echo both the situation and the feeling, I applaud your work. Nicely done.
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Ms-CoffeePixie Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
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:iconripstickgirl22:
ripstickgirl22 Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student Artist
ik im asking the deviant
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bruised--vein Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
If it's not your bloody picture, don't use it.
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Namuamazing Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hey Just enjoy the freaking poem
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bruised--vein Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
A policeman enjoys people as much as the next person, not when they're breaking the rules.

psst, it's a metaphor.
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ripstickgirl22 Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student Artist
if you give credit where credit is due and it works with the poem, there's no reason why i shodnt
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darkSoundWave Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
you kill or be killed. you show yourself as inferior you will be treated as such.
It is his duty to respect your gender because of his, and because he's not following this one simple rule you must seek help in others. You're not the one to take the hits and you must'nt allow it be as such.
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Namuamazing Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I've read hundreds of these and nothing has happened :squee:
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XDawnRyuzakiUchihaX Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student General Artist
Very beautiful! good job! c:
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xxxEmochixxxx Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
STRONG...I love it :)
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MonicaArlene Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student Writer
This is beautifully written, and very powerful!
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ripstickgirl22 Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student Artist
thank you so muchhhh!
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AlexanJ Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Ok, I don't normally read something, but I read this one and I think it was amazing.
Keep up the good work, hun!!

:iconthumbsupplz:
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ripstickgirl22 Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student Artist
why thanks!
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AlexanJ Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
No problem, just be sure to make some more awesome things as that one.
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krulez10 Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Good for you for standing up for yourself :nod:
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FluffyLover1986 Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
Next time he opens his mouth, give him a tasty knuckle sandwich.

Preferably wearing gauss wraps.
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ripstickgirl22 Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student Artist
sounds good :D
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elbajadord Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
why i'm so depressed
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AraDovahkiin Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I feel you!! Bully victim since Kindergarten, every day since.
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ripstickgirl22 Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student Artist
im so so sorry. hope this helps
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arekusandaa-neko Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
I hope the person becomes nicer soon
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hallthirteen Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
it's so strong, powerful and depressing... such a nice work of poetry
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Alliton14 Featured By Owner May 19, 2012
this is basically how i feel everyday. this was really touching to the heart and i loved it!
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Ino-Elric Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This has a beautiful morbid and reality feel to it.
Great job :)
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ripstickgirl22 Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student Artist
thanks!
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AkaiChounokoe Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I know how you feel, my sisters do the same damn thing and I always come up with something to say with their dumbasses
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Ana1129 Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You should just like, put this on your locker! That's what I would do!
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ripstickgirl22 Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student Artist
hahah i shod!
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Ana1129 Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Then the "person" might see it! And the whole school would see how good of a poet you are!:D
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ripstickgirl22 Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Student Artist
well idk if i want other ppl in the skool seeing this...
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Ana1129 Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yeah I see wht u mean.
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Hazelnut-Eyes Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I can seriously relate to this.
Unfortunately not as many people are as brave to speak out about it as you are
Nice little poem :3
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ripstickgirl22 Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student Artist
haha i felt like i just had to say sumtin
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Hazelnut-Eyes Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Good for you :)

I know how it feels. I tried to stand up to the person who is like this to me, but they just said things that I couldn't answer to.
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ripstickgirl22 Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student Artist
same here!
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Hazelnut-Eyes Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I know, but I've just got to get on and live my life. I've been told they tease me because they are jealous, but what is there to be jealous of? It's just some sick fun, some isn't even true.
I hate people who live of other peoples sadness.
It hurts.

Good luck in the future ♡
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ripstickgirl22 Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student Artist
ive been told they r jealous too. And good luck to you too!
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